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Hum Hindustani

27 Aug

Hum sab hindustani hai
Hum Bharat ma se pyaar karte hai

When my eldest one was 3 and 1/2 yrs old

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3 Comments

Posted by on August 27, 2007 in Uncategorized

 

3 responses to “Hum Hindustani

  1. nightingale

    March 2, 2011 at 4:26 pm

    hi raajlakshmi you have written very good two lines add two more lines. mandakini

     
  2. nightingale

    March 2, 2011 at 4:28 pm

    tarah tarah ke poshak hamare phir bhi dil hai ek hamare hows that

     
  3. nightingale

    March 2, 2011 at 4:33 pm

    when u write about butterflies think of their colours. immagin very very green garden and colourful shrubs and blue sky and golden rays and smell of fresh flowers and your poem will be beautiful

     

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