Hum sab hindustani hai
Hum Bharat ma se pyaar karte hai
When my eldest one was 3 and 1/2 yrs old
Posted by askJayaa on August 27, 2007 in Uncategorized
March 2, 2011 at 4:26 pm
hi raajlakshmi you have written very good two lines add two more lines. mandakini
March 2, 2011 at 4:28 pm
tarah tarah ke poshak hamare phir bhi dil hai ek hamare hows that
March 2, 2011 at 4:33 pm
when u write about butterflies think of their colours. immagin very very green garden and colourful shrubs and blue sky and golden rays and smell of fresh flowers and your poem will be beautiful
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